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When fragile hopes and fears collide
It waits for you on the other side

I can feel the tremors in my soul
I've grown afraid of the masquerade.
Barely holding on, I'm losing control
Wide awake, I confide in the shade.

Sinking so slowly down the drain
Much like the purple pill I swallow.
A voice unheard is a voice in vane
Black rain falls and teardrop's follow.

Shadows loom throughout the room
They cover my eyes like a veil.
Just flip the switch, it'll be over soon
Just pull the curtain over the pale.

The transition rattles my psyche at first
Yet it's a feeling I've always invited.
For when my body becomes submersed
I discover my worlds benighted.

I wonder how much time has passed
Fading deeper into the stark domain.
A place like this, shows no contrast
But it's a place I must ascertain.

I call this smoke-filled cell a prison
That harbors questions of fruition.
But like a zombie, I have risen
To greet the face of my mortician.

I'm taken with its abysmal skies
Now I reap the chilling silence.
Like a murder of crows, it flies
Making peace to quell the violence.

In its emptiness, I conceive
A myriad of thoughts, to which entomb.
A haunting force that I believe
Can hold me close within its womb.

I'm going to stay here indefinitely
Like a raven perched atop a gravestone.
Until an outer force acts upon me
I calmly remain here, alone.

Unwillingly, the light shines through
Exposing the half-realm I forswore.
Oh solemn night, I bid you adieu
When you call me again, I will not ignore.

So turn off the lights and turn on the dark
It's on this journey, you shall embark.
:iconbebopboy:
It’s a common emotion to find comfort in the light,
An emotion I’ve never related to.
Tell me…
Where does the dark take you?
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:iconangelichope:
Unbelievable!!!! Beautiful and brilliant imagery; great flow, and very cool darkness and emotions of this!!!!!! It's absolutely flawless, and you have enormous skills!!!!
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Mood: Joy ~sumersela Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
light only brings pain

darkness is what i embrace ^^

glad there are more of us

and i like the poem
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:icondarkgirlshope:
I feel comfortable in the moonlight. I find it to be rather inspiring :)
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~xLuckyxFridayx13x Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an interesting poem, I like it. :)

And I actually feel more comfortable in dim lighting or near darkness. Just a personal preference, though.
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Mood: Love ~Horrorgirl135 Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A beautiful poem, full of mystery. Very well written too. I rather enjoyed it.
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Mood: Love ~MaryEvans Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very pretty. I wish I could say more but that's all that comes to mind. It's somewhat dark, somewhat gloomy with a speck of mystery and beautiful verses.
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:iconjustsmile77:
Where does the dark take me? Sleep.
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~Invoking Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That made me laugh really hard! x3 brilliant

And a lovely poem this is, too :meow:
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