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She wraps herself in somber lies
Step out of the rain, don't drown my dear.
Consumed by grief and doubt, she cries
She has but nothing left to fear.

She squanders love as it comes her way
Step into the light, don't hide my dear.
With a wistful plea, she begs him to stay
But does her frail heart prove sincere?

She regrets letting him slip though her fingers
Step out of the cold, don't shiver my dear.
On the tip of her tongue, her lost love lingers
The sorrow foretold that they wouldn't cohere.

Streams of scarlet run down her shoulder
Step into the darkness, don't wither my dear.
All she needs is for someone to hold her
Someone to listen as she sheds a tear.

Silence becomes her, as still as the night
Step into the warmth, don't freeze my dear.
To take that plunge off a bridge, she might
Only to bring forth the end that is near.

She carries on her tenuous life
Step away from it all, don't weep my dear.
Cutting her deep like the sharpest knife
This state of apprehension won't disappear.

Tracing the marks of despair on her skin
She stares at her reflection and sighs.
When will the comfort she yearns for begin?
As it falls apart under grimmest of skies.

She paints a smile to fool and deceive
Then loses her will as she falls to the floor
Her listless mindset cannot perceive
As she utters the words "no more, no more".

Her beauty shows
Yet sadness grows.
As she remains
A wilted rose.
If you don't give a rose enough love it dies, also if you give a
rose too much love it dies.
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tommyboywood Sep 26, 2013  Professional Writer
Lol. You have a seeming fascination with weak-willed women.  Excellent poetry
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kiracrazy9999 Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love it it relates so much to evryday life evyr love that crosses n ends up broken we do wilt away in my opinion
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:iconheartofpoetry:
Beautiful, the ending is marvelous too
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TheMoorMaiden Apr 18, 2012  Student Writer
This is very lovely; I really like the repetition of 'my dear', and the rhyme scheme does wonders. :) It gives it a very song-like quality. For whatever reason this piece makes me think of 'Beauty and the Beast', but my head's never really been screwed on right. :P
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tollykit Apr 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
Beautiful poem.
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HollyBear007 Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i always say "every rose has its thorns."
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wanderingwitchoftime Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is TOO amazing
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C00kieMuncher Apr 15, 2012
Sad but so sweet,too.
I love it.
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:iconpeipei22:
Very beautiful poem :3
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